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Saturday, December 11, 2010

(6) Facebook rants to make you think about bad English vs good English (21-25)

Rant No. 21: Why don't we know that non-essential clauses placed in the midst of a sentence should be set off from the rest of the sentence by commas?

UNACCEPTABLE: "Ashok Row Kavi, the Father of gay activism in India said, 'What I like....' " (Bangalore Mirror, Dec. 5)

ACCEPTABLE: "Ashok Row Kavi, the father of gay activism in India, said, 'What I like....' "
December 6 at 12:55pm
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      Samarpita Samaddar And BM wrote 'F' of 'father' in Caps?

      December 6 at 2:13pm

    • Ramesh Prabhu Yes. I am glad you noticed it, Sam. :-)
      December 6 at 2:17pm

    • December 6 at 2.54pm
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      Rant No. 22: In my time, headline errors were unforgivable. ToI has goofed up twice today what do you make of that?

      1. Page 18, lead story: "Champion of free speech become its worst gag"

      2. Page 19: "Miner offers $3.5B for Riversdale in which Tata hold biggest stake"
      December 7 at 10:08am

    • Sudha Aries likes this.

    • Shiv Sujir Guess the 's' no longer matter ;)
      December 7 at 10:24am

    • Avinash Kumai Mr nitpicker...
      December 7 at 5:21pm

    • Sudha Aries bad subbing!
      December 7 at 6.54pm
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      Rant No. 23: Why does ToI insist on using the lower case "i" for the first person singular on the Edit Page?

      Page 16, Dec. 5: "When i was checking in..."; "But for all my trying, i could not match the shared pain i saw...."

      Page 16, today: Headline
      'I played a baddie in Aayi milan ki... But i got all the seetis'; "When i came out of hospital, i looked like a peeled tomato".
      Wednesday at 10:47am

    • Edward D'Mello One more glaring rant: Times Now reported on an incident where some men were caught traveling in the ladies' compartment of Delhi Metro. The report began with "Women policemen slapped young men who travelled in the ladies' compartment..." Whatever happened to "policewomen..."?
      Wednesday at 10:52am

    • Ramesh Prabhu Hahaha!
      Wednesday at 10:55am

    • Bala Murali Krishna One more from ToI's top article on the edit page: "...waited with baited breath."
      Wednesday at 11:32am

    • Sudhir Prabhu Another one by the group. This time by Arnab Goswami on Times Now
      "... yesterday night.."
      Wednesday at 11:46am

    • Edward D'Mello Yes, that's a common mistake by both Times Now and CNN IBN.
      Wednesday at 11:55am

    • Ramesh Prabhu BTW, did you all know that "baited breath" is an eggcorn?

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eggcorn

      Wednesday at 2:51pm

    • Bala Murali Krishna I wonder then if the usage was deliberate
      Wednesday at 3:45pm

    • Ramesh Prabhu I doubt it, Bala. This seems to be a case of sloppy subbing.
      Wednesday at 4:22pm

    • Bala Murali Krishna guess so. great find on your part so we learn something new every day.
      Wednesday at 4:50pm

    • Edward D'Mello One more common newsreader mistake for your collection, Ramesh: "The situation would've been more better".
      Wednesday at 5:11pm

    • Avinash Kumai House style?
      Wednesday at 7:52pm

    • Sudha Aries It looks so bad sir! don't know probably their house style, but then it is a grammatical error as well!
      Wednesday at 11:05pm

    • Ramesh Prabhu It's ToI house style, sure, for the Edit Page, but how can any newspaper (or media organisation) break accepted rules of grammar for the sake of house style? I am told the lower case 'i' is at the insistence of the ToI proprietors, who insist that this is "good for the ego" (because the capital 'I' is bad for the ego, I presume). Do you get it? I don't.
      Thursday at 10.20am
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      Rant No. 24: Why don't we know how to spell "calendar"? Caption in Saturday's Mint: "... Toyota expects to sell 70,000 units of the two cars by the end of the next CALENDER year." [emphasis added]
      Thursday at 1:24pm


    • Shruthi Shiva Do they really have the need to use the word, 'calendar'? It's not like, they want to say, fiscal year. Next year, is good enough, ain't?
      Thursday at 2:17pm

    • Ramesh Prabhu Good point, Shruthi. I think "calendar year" was specified because Mint is a business newspaperthat's probably house style.
      Thursday at 3:19pm
       
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      Rant No. 25: Why do so many of us spell (and pronounce) "pronunciation" as "pronounciation"?
      Yesterday at 12:03pm

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